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Author Message alex stolis New member Username: alex_stolis Post Number: 29 Registered: 05-2005 Posted on Thursday, June 23, 2005 - 4:37 pm:        The rain drops like a raven into the street puddles in the shape of ships. You tell me the slope of a bow, is like the curve of an apple-- my trigger finger presses the small of your back. Laurie Byro Intermediate Member Username: lauriette Post Number: 1004 Registered: 11-2003 Posted on Thursday, June 23, 2005 - 4:54 pm:        I love this damn better and better this is totally different from a recognisable to me alex poem (not that I am saying you write badly) you know what I mean laurie Kathy Paupore Intermediate Member Username: kathy Post Number: 2050 Registered: 12-2003 Posted on Thursday, June 23, 2005 - 7:55 pm:        Alex, very tight. Enjoyed. K Gary Blankenship Advanced Member Username: garyb Post Number: 4051 Registered: 07-2001 Posted on Friday, June 24, 2005 - 8:38 am:        Alex, East Asian if any is. Fine work. I would drop the at the start. Thanks. Gary Drop in read the new MindFire, 2005's first Go in through http://www.mindfirerenew.com/ to get to the issue in a click or two. alex stolis New member Username: alex_stolis Post Number: 30 Registered: 05-2005 Posted on Saturday, June 25, 2005 - 9:11 am:        laurie i know exactly what you mean... ...that should probably scare me thank you i was looking for something different kathy thank you for taking the time to read and comment, i appreciate it gary thanks much you are correct the the is dropped thanks again Laurie Byro Intermediate Member Username: lauriette Post Number: 1019 Registered: 11-2003 Posted on Monday, June 27, 2005 - 6:23 pm:        me again scary scary me smiling cause this got an HM SEE ALEX YOU may not know anything, or know what you are doing, or any of that but I CERTAINLY haha know when I see good writing and yours is putting on my Halloween mask nope not THAT scary peace laurie alex stolis New member Username: alex_stolis Post Number: 31 Registered: 05-2005 Posted on Tuesday, June 28, 2005 - 7:06 pm:        your right i really don't know much i don't even know what an hm is though if it makes you smile it must be a good thing if you know good writing you must know that yours is one of the best and sometime soon even more folks will see that ...keep smiling peace from yer pal stranded in the midwest